Thursday, January 21, 2010

January 21, 2010 After Reading Peter Pan

After Reading Peter Pan

My mother closed her window
She did not want Peter to talk her away.

My father opened his window
He wanted to go, as soon as possible.

And now, years later, they
are too old to Never-Never Land.

And they do not speak
to each other

And my mother is surprise
to hear that I, at age seven ,

Flung the windows wide,
Not to travel, but to fly.


Out of this week’s packet, this was my favorite poem. This poem to me represents adventure and freedom that many people seek. I love how the author compares his parent’s interpretation of the story Peter Pan and how it affects their behavior. Because to me the mother is more of a home body, her home is where she feels comfortable. However, the father seeks adventure; he wants to explore the world and what it has to offer. These two big differences is the reason they did not work out. Which could be the reason the author wrote, “And they do not speak.” I also love that this is a two line stanza poem, because it is short, easy to read and provide the necessary facts to relate to readers.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Jan. 20, 2010

Complaining About Nothing

In the morning I complain,
How someone has used all the toothpaste
In the morning I complain,
How someone has left trash in my car
In the Morning I complain,
How traffic is so bad.

In the afternoon I complain
How my teacher didn’t show up
In the afternoon I complain,
How much homework I have to do
In the afternoon I complain,
That I have to go to work

At night I complain,
About my rough day
At night I complain,
To my mom as we watch the news

At night I see how an earthquake has hit Haiti
At night I see how many people bodies are lying dead on the street
At night I see how the people in Haiti lost everything
At night I thank God for blessing me.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Fairytale with a Twist

Anne Sexton, "Cinderella"

You always read about it:
the plumber with the twelve children
who wins the Irish Sweepstakes.
From toilets to riches.
That story.


Or the nursemaid,
some luscious sweet from Denmark
who captures the oldest son's heart.
from diapers to Dior.
That story.


Or a milkman who serves the wealthy,
eggs, cream, butter, yogurt, milk,
the white truck like an ambulance
who goes into real estate
and makes a pile.
From homogenized to martinis at lunch.


Or the charwoman
who is on the bus when it cracks up
and collects enough from the insurance.
From mops to Bonwit Teller.
That story.


Once
the wife of a rich man was on her deathbed
and she said to her daughter Cinderella:
Be devout. Be good. Then I will smile
down from heaven in the seam of a cloud.
The man took another wife who had
two daughters, pretty enough
but with hearts like blackjacks.
Cinderella was their maid.
She slept on the sooty hearth each night
and walked around looking like Al Jolson.
Her father brought presents home from town,
jewels and gowns for the other women
but the twig of a tree for Cinderella.
She planted that twig on her mother's grave
and it grew to a tree where a white dove sat.
Whenever she wished for anything the dove
would drop it like an egg upon the ground.
The bird is important, my dears, so heed him.


Next came the ball, as you all know.
It was a marriage market.
The prince was looking for a wife.
All but Cinderella were preparing
and gussying up for the event.
Cinderella begged to go too.
Her stepmother threw a dish of lentils
into the cinders and said: Pick them
up in an hour and you shall go.
The white dove brought all his friends;
all the warm wings of the fatherland came,
and picked up the lentils in a jiffy.
No, Cinderella, said the stepmother,
you have no clothes and cannot dance.
That's the way with stepmothers.


Cinderella went to the tree at the grave
and cried forth like a gospel singer:
Mama! Mama! My turtledove,
send me to the prince's ball!
The bird dropped down a golden dress
and delicate little slippers.
Rather a large package for a simple bird.
So she went. Which is no surprise.
Her stepmother and sisters didn't
recognize her without her cinder face
and the prince took her hand on the spot
and danced with no other the whole day.

As nightfall came she thought she'd better
get home. The prince walked her home
and she disappeared into the pigeon house
and although the prince took an axe and broke
it open she was gone. Back to her cinders.
These events repeated themselves for three days.
However on the third day the prince
covered the palace steps with cobbler's wax
and Cinderella's gold shoe stuck upon it.
Now he would find whom the shoe fit
and find his strange dancing girl for keeps.
He went to their house and the two sisters
were delighted because they had lovely feet.
The eldest went into a room to try the slipper on
but her big toe got in the way so she simply
sliced it off and put on the slipper.
The prince rode away with her until the white dove
told him to look at the blood pouring forth.
That is the way with amputations.
They just don't heal up like a wish.
The other sister cut off her heel
but the blood told as blood will.
The prince was getting tired.
He began to feel like a shoe salesman.
But he gave it one last try.
This time Cinderella fit into the shoe
like a love letter into its envelope.

At the wedding ceremony
the two sisters came to curry favor
and the white dove pecked their eyes out.
Two hollow spots were left
like soup spoons.

Cinderella and the prince
lived, they say, happily ever after,
like two dolls in a museum case
never bothered by diapers or dust,
never arguing over the timing of an egg,
never telling the same story twice,
never getting a middle-aged spread,
their darling smiles pasted on for eternity.
Regular Bobbsey Twins.
That story.

In traditional romantic fairytales, writers create imaginary worlds by producing stories of unrealistic reports of human and nonhuman experiences. Throughout many of these fairytales, the main characters escape their current situation and receive a happy life. The most obvious representation of this episode is the Grimm brother’s version of Cinderella. In Cinderella, a young lady is treated as a servant by her step mother and step sisters, until she is rescued by a handsome prince and lives happily ever after. This particular interpretation of gender roles is one of the main reasons feminist critic Anne Sexton, challenge the unrealistic beliefs in traditional romantic fairytales. I love Anne Sexton’s twist on the tradition Cinderella, because she challenges the description of women in the Grimm brother’s fairytale “Cinderella.”She uses a sarcastic tone to depict the idea that marriage is the only way for women to achieve happiness. She takes the focus out of marriage and ask women to focus on themselves.