Thursday, February 11, 2010

Lip Balm "Haiku"

Lip Balm

It's nice to observe,
the candy-coated honey drips
drizzle your soft lips.

By: Shanterica Brooks

2 comments:

  1. I like the haiku and good images. I could taste the lip balm. I think it's cool you took an object we all know and made it new again.

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  2. Short and sweet.... I love " the candy-coated honey drips" I also could taste the lip gloss. I think your three lines simply covered what us girls feel about lip gloss.

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