Raining
It's raining outside,
I hear the gentle drops fall
echoing softly.
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I really like this. I think haiku is very challenging form of poetry, however you've found a way to present an image everyone is familair with and can clearly picture in their mind. I really like the words "echoing softly" on the last line. Nice Job!
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