Saturday, March 13, 2010

Speeding Ticket Haiku

Cruising in the streets
I start to hear beep, beep, beep
damn it's the police.

1 comment:

  1. I like this alot. The only suggestion that I have is about the sounds. I love "beep" but I'm not sure that is what I would think of when I think of a police siren. Maybe there is another word that represents that just a little better?

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